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vertigo
i'm not in my
right
state of mind.
i am
dizzy.
i am
haunted by
friends who aren't much of
anything anymore.
i am
going crazy.
i
need help.
these demons have
gotten me under. not letting me
breathe the
air of
sanity.
things are not
what they seem
in this dream
that we call
reality.
this hell has
got me under,
not letting me
see that
bright light
that is coming behind that door.
this world is just a
dream.
i'm going under.
i'm going under.
-hella surprised-
This is wonderful--it's prosaic and spaced. I love that.
things are not
what they seem
in this dream
Did you mean to rhyme here? Unmeant rhyme is the best, if you ask me. This is definetely your best--you could put music to it, yo. Four and a half stars.