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hm...undying devotion...
can i
*keep you*
in
*my world*
of
*love*
is what i have
*for you*
i would give
*the world*
has not seen enough of
*your kind*
smile makes me melt in
*your arms*
are light yet strong,
*just right*
is what you are
*to me*
you are
*the one*
who holds
*the key*
to
*my heart*
is yours
*for always*
i'll
*love you*
with undying devotion.
i havent seen u write like this before but i think i might understand it. i think they way u wrote the words
*(whatever phrase u were using)* is actually supposed to be written twice. for ex.
can i
keep you.
keep you
in
my world.
my world
of
love.
love
is what i have
for you.
and so on and so forth. nice style.
i like poems that make me think outside the box.
for the box makes us all ordinary.
First off, you didn't fool me. I've seen things written like this before. >D
forget your legs around my hips.
forget your hands pressed on my back.
forget all the letters that i kept.
this is another i won't send.
forget your lips, your eyes, your thighs.
forget our one last kiss goodbye.
forget me staking out your house.
forget ive got you figured out.
great song. you're great.