The EFFECT of a living OCEAN



             A heart filled by ocean desire

           blood rushes like waves up the beach

             heat created, heat felt by face

                     the sea smell

                 and now, the smell seen

                    a warm ocean breeze

           overcomes, engulfs a captive audience

            the passion of the ocean is within

                 the water closes around

                    its warmth felt

                 the sound, the murmur

             the ocean enhances every sense

                fulfilled, wanted, admired

                         the ocean

                        the ocean

                the desire of the ocean



                 euphoric is the effect


Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a poem penned by a very good friend of mine, in response to my OCEAN DESIRE. I liked it so i talked him into allowing me to submit it. This one is from the talented Mr Rhino, I hope you enjoy enough to offer feedback which I would be most pleased to pass on...thankyou

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