Wondering

                         Wondering



                        

                          Sitting

                           here

                          missing

                           you

                          Wishing

                           you

                         would call.

                         Wondering...

                    how hard will I fall?

                         Wondering...

                          if you

                       are thinking

                          of me

                               at

                                all.

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Beverley McInnis's picture

Short, simple and packed with emotion. Well done!

Dead Poet's picture

man..... i'm just trying to recall how many times those thoughts have come through my head, and i realized... a buncha times. i have someone whom i'm deeply in love with and i always want to be with him... but due to circumstances in life, i just can't. this very piece or yours flows through my head on a daily basis, except a different version. minutes last longer than hours hours last longer than days when you are here, the hour goes by in a second tic toc an endless minute when are you going to make time fly for me? i'd love to sit and chase time just a pice that i just came up with tell me what you think!

hawksquaw99's picture

how many times have I sat waiting and wondering?????? too many times to count.... this was a very moving piece..... I am so glad that you let me know about all these new ones.... Renee'

Michelle Noel's picture

Tanya, I really like this one. Love the minimalist style you chose for it. simple but to the point. Very nice