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Take My Breath Away
Beside me is an empty space
The place where you belong.
I feel your absence like a hole
Is that so very wrong?
All I have is a memory
Of a time enjoyed very much
The night fantasy became real
How I trembled at your touch.
With excitement you made me quiver!
With pleasure you made me shake!
I allowed you to have me,
Selfishly I took all that I could take.
Now I want you right beside me
Forever and a day.
To enjoy each other for always,
Come, take my breath away!
Aww, this is so sweet and passionate! You wrote this well, nice job!
Damn that was some deep shit I'm difinitly feeling this, the feeling of missing someone and the freakiness come shining through.
Awe that was so sweet. I really enjoyed this poem. It reads so smooth and flows. It really cute. Nice poem!!!
Tanya - Ace poem girl - imagery is so well done here - Iw as looking around for him. Love Misty :-)
WOW...the passion and love is beautifully conveyed. It makes me wish for my wonderful love who, like yours, is so far away.
OOOOOHHHHHH.....I like this one!!!! Very very nice.
WOW.... are you somehow in my head ....LOL.... this is just the way I felt about the last man that I had in my life.... but then like the others he became some nut case.... and so I had to put him in the road..... this was a cool poem... and I loved it.... Renee'