Heart Drops

Little splashes

           teaming gutters

Heavy showers

           my heart is breaking

Infinite greyness

           cloaks my being

Desperately seeking peace again.



Puddles filling

           raindrops falling

Water streams

           slowly running

Match the path of my tears

           And I watch

                As yet

                   Another

                      heart drop

                             falls.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

penned a while back

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poetvg's picture

nice piece

poetvg's picture

lovely

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Tan A nice poem penned down. Sad times are behind you now girl... look forward to rest of your life. Roz

Walter Kernebeck's picture

WOW! Very moving piece! You do have a way with words! :))

Melvin  Lee's picture

Yet another lovely titled poem..with such emotions from within..... Its marvelous how u compare raindrops to be from the heart, thus becoming heartdrops...And as always, love the way u use your sense of imagery to conjure up realistic dramatic portraits in me. Smilesz....heop u feeling better now.

Tim Marshall's picture

HEART BREAKS SOME GREAT POEMS I LIKED IT AND THANK YOU!

Michelle Noel's picture

Wow...this is so great. This is where I am now in my life...you really hit home. great job

hawksquaw99's picture

awwww words straight from the heart.... the best place for them to come from .... I really loved this one.... keep up the great work... this was awesome... Renee'