Little splashes
teaming gutters
Heavy showers
my heart is breaking
Infinite greyness
cloaks my being
Desperately seeking peace again.
Puddles filling
raindrops falling
Water streams
slowly running
Match the path of my tears
And I watch
As yet
Another
heart drop
falls.
nice piece
lovely
Hi Tan A nice poem penned down. Sad times are behind you now girl... look forward to rest of your life. Roz
WOW! Very moving piece! You do have a way with words! :))
Yet another lovely titled poem..with such emotions from within..... Its marvelous how u compare raindrops to be from the heart, thus becoming heartdrops...And as always, love the way u use your sense of imagery to conjure up realistic dramatic portraits in me. Smilesz....heop u feeling better now.
HEART BREAKS SOME GREAT POEMS I LIKED IT AND THANK YOU!
Wow...this is so great. This is where I am now in my life...you really hit home. great job
awwww words straight from the heart.... the best place for them to come from .... I really loved this one.... keep up the great work... this was awesome... Renee'