...and ramen noodles at 4:30 in the morning

we couldn't survive this fate

you knew it

so did i

but it hurts

to watch you go

"love me now...



...leave me forever"

i won't know you tomorrow

but i'll love every part of you tonight



you knew the secret to my heart

was through my rib cage

and you exploited everything i knew

and still

it comforts me to see your name



don't tell me

i don't know how to feel

till you

feel the way

i do



here is my last big exit

watch my bow

don't forget

to clap



you'll miss me when i'm gone

Author's Notes/Comments: 

the title comes from one of my favorite Better Than Ezra songs "under you"... such a beautiful song... the poem comes from being up at 3 in the AM and thinking... always thinking.

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"love me now...

...leave me forever"

Good..

don't tell me
i don't know how to feel
till you
feel the way
i do

GREAT.