today you played your heart with me
and caught a
fallng
star
i think we could fall in love
wouldn't that be a new perfect
if we pass one moment of happiness
your bright eyes will fade
i won't let love become dull
lets take a chance
on love
on us
on a time we can watch the stars
starlight starbright
you're my only star tonight
I thought I'd critiqued this.
wouldn't that be a new perfect
I really like that line. Really.
I loved the poem! My favorite part was the last statement. It's so heartfelt and pure.