for the love of stars

today you played your heart with me

and caught a

fallng

star

i think we could fall in love

wouldn't that be a new perfect



if we pass one moment of happiness

your bright eyes will fade



i won't let love become dull



lets take a chance

on love

on us

on a time we can watch the stars



starlight starbright

you're my only star tonight

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wanted to make over the stars, but on second thought they're perfect.

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Josh Glasgow's picture

I thought I'd critiqued this.

wouldn't that be a new perfect

I really like that line. Really.

Preston's picture

I loved the poem! My favorite part was the last statement. It's so heartfelt and pure.