1 November 2002 - 8:11pm — Thamica McCook (not verified)
Hey girl I'm back. Missed ya. I love this poem it is so good. I like the line "...from a pipe that leaks,filling my head with fantasy..." You are a really good writer and you have the rhyming tongue! Anyways I'm going back to read more.
4 February 2002 - 10:46pm — Julie Cruz (not verified)
very good piece of work. i can most definitely relate to it specially right now. check out my poems and please... comment particularly to "a broken forever" my newest piece. i like your style of poetry and the words are so easy to relate to yet very uniquely put. great work
I must have sighed 11 times when I read this. A very thoughtful, hearfelt, touching piece or writing Suzy. Does the person who inspired it know it exists? If so, I wonder what their reaction was? I think "Into my thoughts your memory creeps" is my favorit line. When you can hardly have a notion without the memory of a loved one sneaking in somewhere, I think you can safely say cupid got you right through the heart. Thanks for sharing it! stu
Hey girl I'm back. Missed ya. I love this poem it is so good. I like the line "...from a pipe that leaks,filling my head with fantasy..." You are a really good writer and you have the rhyming tongue! Anyways I'm going back to read more.
very good piece of work. i can most definitely relate to it specially right now. check out my poems and please... comment particularly to "a broken forever" my newest piece. i like your style of poetry and the words are so easy to relate to yet very uniquely put. great work
I must have sighed 11 times when I read this. A very thoughtful, hearfelt, touching piece or writing Suzy. Does the person who inspired it know it exists? If so, I wonder what their reaction was? I think "Into my thoughts your memory creeps" is my favorit line. When you can hardly have a notion without the memory of a loved one sneaking in somewhere, I think you can safely say cupid got you right through the heart. Thanks for sharing it! stu
beautiful love poem. it really sounds true. liked this most: "Into my thoughts your memory creeps/ like water". thanks for sharing. salam..
Suzy, Beautiful love poem. I hope he loved it. Linda