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Daddy You Broke My heart
Daddy you broke my heart,you blew my whole world apart.
My childhood years were full of laughter and tears.
You gave me your love and chased away my fears.
Daddy you broke my heart.
Daddy you done everything for me.
Iremember being on your knee.
I gave you a smile and your life was worthwhile.
You loved me so very much you see
But Daddy what about all the others,all my sisters and brothers.
They needed your love and care.
All your love for me you did not share.
Daddy it was very wrong to make them feel they did not belong.
They needed a daddy to, the kind i got from you.
Daddy you let them down.
Daddy i must rebuild my life. I am now a mother and a wife.
I have responsibilities now you see your wee girl i can no longer be.
Daddy you broke my heart.
Daddy its time to let go,i am a big girl now you know.
you must right your wrongs and make them belong.
Dont cheat dont lie dont make my brothers and sisters cry.
Daddy you broke my heart, you blew my whole world apart.
So long as i live all my love to them i give, because they need it far more than you.
Very touching Lisa.
You dont explain to the reader why or how your father broke your heart, you simply focus on that fact and its impact. You nicely show the growth from child to woman to parent.
Good work.
Martin