walk by
i want to cry
but you dont seem to recognize
just see this smiling face
missing in my place
dont you see past my eyes
look deep and youll find
everything that she tries to hide
the raging flames of her desire
to fly away just to be higher
from what she lives through everyday
shes wishes there was just another way
things just arent the same
the only thing people know is her name
a trapped soul
filled with her tears
from all of the heartbreaking years
she suffurs in a deadly silence
set her loose
before she ends herself with a noose
building these walls for security
mainly because of her impurities
quietly she stares off into a distance
questioning her own existence
flashbacks flood her mind
missing everything she had
just took a turn for the bad
everything she was
now a trail of peices left behind
just wanting to rewined
for the sake of time
just sit there and pretend that shes fine
waiting to be revived
as shes nearly dead on the inside
but her she still stands in her desiguise
filled with all those caged in lies...
Truth and Pure
Very good! Stating our true feelings always comes out right.
I also find my best poems are the ones that didnt take as much time.. My would go with the flow.
I look forward reading more.
Read some of my poems if you'd like
Ashley Cote
thanks you so much i
thanks you so much i appreciate you viewing my work ill be sure to check yours out soon :)
forever and always <3 Jenn
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This is great I love the flow, the pain, the cry out.. it is full of what poetry really is. The inner person screaming out. I think that you will become a great poet as you spend more time here. I look forward to seeing your work grow with you!
ohh wow!! thanks i didnt
ohh wow!! thanks i didnt really think i was that great as a writter... im actually only 15 years old and i have alot of trapped emotions so i let it out throug my poetry :) thanks for the comment :) i really try to make my verses flow but the rhymes arent forced they just naturally come to me when i write.
forever and always <3 Jenn
Wow this was really good how
Wow this was really good how long did you spend on this particular piece?
this poem actually didnt take
this poem actually didnt take that long, i spent maybe 15 mins the most. i actually wronte this during one of my classes at school cuz i had nothing to do and alot on my mind. i appreciate your comment and some how this particlular poem has the most veiws.
forever and always <3 Jenn
yeah i think it has the most
yeah i think it has the most views because it flows so well