comparative

seeing from outside in
seeing in a different lens

detailed outline
space
you erasing the stars I’ve
placed in the sky

but autumn learns to shed leaves
so shall
so shall you
winter learns to bury the trees
so shall you
shall you?

keep me in your sitting room
keep me or leave me soon
leave me soon

slowly suddenly
space invades
you’ll overwrite with a new
empty page    

but autumn learns to shed leaves
so shall
so shall you
winter learns to bury the trees
so shall you
shall you?

ill be your flower
stopping its bloom
you’ll be a new flower
singing a tune

autumn leaves fall
winter trees thaw
you will
you will
after all
Author's Notes/Comments: 

though i want to take things in my own hands, I must allow God to "unthaw my trees" and "fall my leaves"

because in my own power, i cannot fix a situation, only in His hand.
Only His.

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