Denial/Admittance

Trust me he said

Believe in me he said

Love me he said

Now your dead

I'm sorry he said

I loved her he said

I needed her he said

Slowly crying tears she bled

I didn't do it he said

Why would I do it? he said

She loved me he said

We were to be wed

She pissed me off he said

So I hit her he said

Once, then twice he said

Yeah I shot her in the head

She needed that he said

She was a bitch he said

She smiled too much he said

So I killed her in her bed

I loved her he said

And she loved me he said

I cried for her he said

And now... she's dead.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

About a show I saw on T.V once. A guy he killed his girlfriend, as the police asked him questiosn he denies it all, but then slowly he cracks admitting everything he did to her even how he killed her.So I wrote a poem about it..

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It's great how you can take something like a tv show and write a poem about it. I loved the poem and this is where I want to be with my poetry/crap but it's hard for me so i write what I live