Just turn and walk away
Forget the words you want to say
Hold back the anger boiling rough
Just walk away forget your tough
Unclench your hands held in fists so tight
just forget about it, relax tonight
But instead your anger burns to hot
You turn back around believe it or not
You push your way back through the crowd
Clench your fists, ego proud
One hit, two, three then four
You just keep hitting until he's on the floor
But you can't stop now, your out of control
Revenge you Sought, his life you stole
Crippled body on the ground
People walk by, keep stepping around
But now you did it, you wen to far
You walk away and get in your car.
But he's not moving, he lay still
Avoided,had you not taken that pill
While he lay sleeping never to wake
while you sober, not remembering your mistake
A terrified mother cries out her goodbyes
You high mind still stupidly fly's
Your out of touch with time and place
You have fallen so far from grace.
very deep I loved it as always keep up the great work.
I neva no what to say for a critique, but I jus wanted to say this poem is awsome : ) ~^^~