in the space of a breath

breathing spaces
 

I take a breath on a heartbeat

in the spaces of moments
I respire in these moments

 lost in the sense of you
These are the spaces I live for
these moments,
between our breathing spaces

 

   

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Oh man! What happened? I had

Oh man! What happened? I had some great times and good writes like this. Remember to come back to this folder often. Put an alarm on your phone to remember... love is what you’re good at.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Ssmoothie...

This is my new fave poem of your's.

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Thankyou my Loveliness! Good

Thankyou my Loveliness! Good to see you back we missed you dear! hugss!!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Superb is all I can say with my humble vocabulary Respected SS

Superb is all I can say with my humble vocabulary Respected SS

grime coated words ogle at me thru the PC screen's soft caress


©bishu 

 

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oh Bishy thankyou dear I love

oh Bishy thankyou dear I love all your colourful expressions! ;) I love grime coated words by the way! hugss

 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Can't relate, but one day I

Can't relate, but one day I will. Well written SS.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

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I know you will~ because you

I know you will~ because you wont settle for less :) you are very patient! hugss

 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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When you are here,In the

When you are here,

In the quiet of the morning,

Or the stillness of the night,

It is not the joy of your voice,

Nor the gracefulness of your movements,

Nor the sigh of longing 

To touch you,

Or cuddle,

Or sit hand in hand

Or lay my head upon your lap...

 

None of those things 

Capture me

 

Like simply observing the essence

Of you.

 

....NL1220


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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That is so beautiful

That is so beautiful Nightlight!!! just darling! love it! hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."