Closer still*

 

 

come a little closer,

that chasm between us is millitmeters long,

hold those thoughts

and listen to a  new song  

 

come a little closer,

time to see clearer from this heart instead,

lower those eyes

and tilt that confused head

 

come a little closer,

something Ive wanted to share for a while

its time to reveal this delicate kiss

it goes a little someting like this

 

come a little closer,

lightness and living in this one sweet carress

 moving gently, exploring your depths

a moment of clarity in a lover's breath

 

 

come a little closer,

holding your heart warm like this

loves hold exquisitely replete

a taste of love so discrete

 

 

come a little closer,

time to see clearer from this heart instead,

lower those eyes

and tilt that confused head

 

I promise you'll be okay.

 

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re done :)

re done :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

Very very nice indeed ... The loved one is indeed lucky SS

Very very nice indeed ... The loved one is indeed lucky SS.Beautiful words SS.The rhymes..the thoughts.. Stupendous!!!!!!!!


©bishu 

 

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OOhhh bishy you make me

OOhhh bishy you make me swoon! I love your exuberance! you are such a delight in each way every day as I make my way through the highway of poems you really are so wonderfully vivid and sure know how to show em! hugss. Always such a delight to read your comments!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

This seriously needs to be

This seriously needs to be put to music! This is gorgeous!  =tilt that confused head...= <3


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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I wish! lovely to see you on

I wish! lovely to see you on here again! hugss pm me!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."