And I miss you

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Seems endless
Cold nights upon tepid days
You don't come by any more
And I miss you,
like the desserts miss the rain,
Like sadness misses it's smile,
Like life misses its reason,
No lovers guile could soothe
This strange pain of treason
Where are you love?
If only I could feel your heart,
See your thoughts
And hear your dreams,
Am I no longer in them?
My thoughts and dreams
Burn my heart with false realities
But even this,
I bare willingly
To remember you.
Cause I miss you,
like crazy misses the insane;
Like breath misses air,
Like
I miss you

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darkpool's picture

yeah, missing someone really

yeah, missing someone really hurts, I share your pain. It takes real steel to "move on."

SSmoothie's picture

Thankyou darkpool, I can't

Thankyou darkpool,
I can't wait to read some of your stuff :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

;-)

I totally love this one!

My favorite line, "like crazy misses the insane"!!!

SSmoothie's picture

I'm crazy, does that make you

I'm crazy, that makes you insane? ;) HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

;-)

Short trip for me!!! HugSS!!!

ashes_theartofburning's picture

I hear ya Sade!

Made me think of this song.

I really liked this write SS.

"like the crazy misses the insane"

Priceless. ^.^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

SSmoothie's picture

That's perfect, I love this

That's perfect, I love this song it's in every portable device I own! ;) love ya! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

grahf's picture

So genuinely wanting. The

So genuinely wanting. The first two lines really set the aching tone for this piece. We've all felt this, and you penned it well.

allets's picture

Miss You Motif

I love the way you say - I love the comparisons, like you I want to hear dreams - and I want poetry that ends like this one does - complete with the feel - Lady A