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The grind blanket.
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When the going gets tough Another weary night
another long day passed
And no better off today
than I was yesterday.
I have to face it again
the grind of tomorrow
Plonked with my blonc
Swig and a swirl,
Chug and a hurl
The lady's delicate fingers
Left with her resolve
Melting into subconciousnes
Letting the blackness
Swallow me like a warm blanket
Oh sleep how I missed thee!
With your warm embrace
May I rise to fight
another tomorrow
Why this one? Don't get it?
Why this one? Don't get it?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I enjoyed this one very much.
I enjoyed this one very much. Life in a nutshell.
Thankyou deviance :D
Thankyou Cevance. :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Perfect!
This one is a total pebble snatch!!! Hours of work!!! ;-) Love ya Dear!
Omg! Cloud nine!!!! :D b! Who
Omg! Cloud nine!!!! :D b! Who hooooooooo!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I think it may be my favorite
I think it may be my favorite yet ;-)
Felt this a lot, especially
Felt this a lot, especially since its Monday
I hope you're feeling better
I hope you're feeling better Bpink! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Deep...made me pause and
Deep...made me pause and think. Beauty in melancholmay the day greet you with loving arms and a sweet caress :)
Awww so sweet and soul
Awww so sweet and soul soothing! Thanks:) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Nice Job
Some unusual vocabulary choices in the middle... but I like it. Sounds very weary. Fun read... I went over it a couple times!
Oh thanks Daniel! ;) cheers!
Oh thanks Daniel! ;) cheers!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks daniel :) much
Thanks daniel :) much appreciated! In short I got tanked a lady glass of wine turned in to a few bottles and a whine! ;) cheers! SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Plonked!
Def: the art of avoiding the blonc...a poem about continuity...nicely fashioned. I felt this one. Personally plonked, I am yours in Wonc- Lady A
I love a good white, but
I love a good white, but sometimes red is just right... Glad you enjoyed ;) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."