The grind blanket.

Another weary night
another long day passed
And no better off today
than I was yesterday.
I have to face it again
the grind of tomorrow
Plonked with my blonc
Swig and a swirl,
Chug and a hurl
The lady's delicate fingers
Left with her resolve
Melting into subconciousnes
Letting the blackness
Swallow me like a warm blanket
Oh sleep how I missed thee!
With your warm embrace
May I rise to fight
another tomorrow

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Why this one? Don't get it?

Why this one? Don't get it?


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

cevance's picture

I enjoyed this one very much.

I enjoyed this one very much. Life in a nutshell.

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Thankyou deviance :D

Thankyou Cevance. :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

Perfect!

This one is a total pebble snatch!!! Hours of work!!! ;-) Love ya Dear!

SSmoothie's picture

Omg! Cloud nine!!!! :D b! Who

Omg! Cloud nine!!!! :D b! Who hooooooooo!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

I think it may be my favorite

I think it may be my favorite yet ;-)

battlepink's picture

Felt this a lot, especially

Felt this a lot, especially since its Monday

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I hope you're feeling better

I hope you're feeling better Bpink! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

soulstonic's picture

Deep...made me pause and

Deep...made me pause and think. Beauty in melancholmay the day greet you with loving arms and a sweet caress :)

SSmoothie's picture

Awww so sweet and soul

Awww so sweet and soul soothing! Thanks:) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

TheShadowKnows's picture

Nice Job

Some unusual vocabulary choices in the middle... but I like it. Sounds very weary. Fun read... I went over it a couple times!

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Oh thanks Daniel! ;) cheers!

Oh thanks Daniel! ;) cheers!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Thanks daniel :) much

Thanks daniel :) much appreciated! In short I got tanked a lady glass of wine turned in to a few bottles and a whine! ;) cheers! SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Plonked!

Def: the art of avoiding the blonc...a poem about continuity...nicely fashioned. I felt this one. Personally plonked, I am yours in Wonc- Lady A



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SSmoothie's picture

I love a good white, but

I love a good white, but sometimes red is just right... Glad you enjoyed ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am