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LOVE AND OTHER RELATED BULLSHIT

the world as I knew it has changed
the sky has fallen, I am not whole,
ocean waves lick my wounded soul
I kiss the sky and and wonder why?

I am deemed most worthy but of what?
the lanscape is barren, and I feel forigen
There is no sun brighter no moon has glowen
any where near where you were born.

the sand hugs my feet, the air wraps me
a symphony of sympathy I feel so patheticly
Lost of hope and love and furtive glances
I lose the string tied gently to my soul

tugged and let loose I watch our hope
float as it ascends to the heavens,
far beyond moon, sun stars and sky
this is the day of lament;
the leaving of your burning question -why?

only the wind, sand, sea and sky know
and they are not given voices of reason and do not say...

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10 July 2013 - 7:00pm — SSmoothie

Boom! Thud.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

28 September 2012 - 3:47am — The_Mav

I really, really, really adore this poem! It just does something to my soul... the ultimate question... who knows why? I just hope someone or something does know otherwise no one is in control! Love the words used here you've created a sense of loss and hope at the same time... Great work! Kind regards The Mav

If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream!

13 March 2013 - 2:47pm — SSmoothie

Thankyou, it's one of my

Thankyou, it's one of my faves the why is a very painful thing when the answers are not forthcoming! Cheers SS.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

20 September 2012 - 11:19am — Moonshadow

"I lose the string tied gently to my soul...

"I lose the string tied gently to my soul
tugged and let loose I watch our hope
float as it ascends to the heavens,
far beyond moon, sun stars and sky
this is the day of lament;
the leaving of your burning question -why?"

I loooove this part right here!

Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

20 September 2012 - 1:35pm — SSmoothie

Yeah that ol question why?

Yeah that ol question why? And it burns, burns, like a ring of fire... Hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

20 September 2012 - 2:02pm — Beavis

F'ing great lines, my Dear!

F'ing great lines, my Dear! ;-) sorry I didn't have time at the time but this was amazing!

only the wind, sand, sea and sky know
and they are not given voices of reason and do not say..."

Jeez! I know you wrote that in 5 minutes, or less!!! You are incredible, my Dear!!! ;-)

20 September 2012 - 2:35pm — SSmoothie

Thanks b when it comes it

Thanks b when it comes it poors, very often it doesn't, but if I don't wite I will stop all together I know me, and you guys matter too much for me to stop. :) I really appreciate your support you're wonderful and have helped me explore and develop my poetry so much dear master poet ;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

15 September 2012 - 7:49pm — INKSTAIN

Ok you got the earth wid and

Ok you got the Earth, wind and fire romance thing going on here, I can respect that! I like it! I like this a lot! It's very different some cool mindscapes! Thanks!

23 September 2012 - 9:03am — SSmoothie