Immaculately wet

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Immaculations of imaginations
The proof is in my day dreams
The crest of a wave ridden high
To the tumbling foam of passion
Cresting then caressing the shore
Against the delicate inlet of a river bank
The thrusting heaving motion pulled
Into the shores of love by the romantic moon
Playful trinkets, left behind, tokens of affections
stars reflected In sparking skin
oh the great and powerful Neptune
a delicate lover it seems
under the pale moon beams
Hugging her shores, enveloping her
Such soft and gentle waves of pleasure
Inspiring soft and gentle moans
And in the retreat as passion wains and ebbs
Then flows and rumbles again with the tide of anticipation
So the moon who comes with love leaves with it
So as to never let the passions die and always remain high
in the sad mournfully missing time at the turning of the tides
Neptune the ever faithful dream lover and gentleman
By the rules of love honorably abides he waits again
For the turning of the tide to put the stars in my eyes.
My Neptune, my hearts immaculate pride.

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Moonshadow's picture

Wow beautiful Ssmoothie! This

Wow beautiful Ssmoothie! This is incredibly romantic! I wish I had an experience like that!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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Thanks moon I do occasionally

Thanks moon I do occasionally get that way! ;) thanks


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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Yo Baby!!!!!

Yo Baby!!!!!

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Haha battle pink! Hugss <3

Haha battle pink! Hugss <3


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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All I Can Say Is..

WOW!!
^_^


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Wow! I got Ashes to stop at

Wow! I got Ashes to stop at WOW!!! love ya! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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;-)

Completely Ssmoothie! ;-) Love it!!!

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww beavis I love

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww beavis I love it that you love it! I love to get u to Love what I love!! HUGSS <3


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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And I love that you are back

And I love that you are back in the saddle again ;-) Ride Cowgirl! Ride!...I mean write, Cowgirl write! ;-)

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Oh yes! YES! YESS, COWBOY

Oh yes! YES! YESS, COWBOY BUCK! ... I mean... ;p


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

poe369's picture

beautiful

Vividly and creatively passionate... Well written and I'm sure your other works will be just as imaginative. Looking forward to reading more.

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Why thank you Poe 369 nice to

Why thank you Poe 369 nice to meet you and I look forward reading your work ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am