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the streets of lust.
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Humanity Wandering the streets of lust
driven by the fire of passion
whetted by the wanting
taken by the ferver
pulled by desire
tricked by envy
lost by love
groans
sobs
cry
Wandering the streets of lust
driven to distraction
given to attraction
brought to satisfaction
exposed to the core
used in unison
again and again
drop to the floor
bend over some more
give it all up
every orifice
full
moan
sob
cry
release
Held back by the rails of love
along these lonely takers streets
it is forgiven.
come.
Great stuff.
I'd be tempted to rework it so that it visually follows a pattern of three isosceles triangles. (I think I mean isosceles) But still excellent as it stands.
I must say I am tempted too.
I must say I am tempted too. but in an initial tweak it wasnt working so I left it but perhaps I could add another verse and make it look like slipping down down down fast? thanks for the idea! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lonely Takers Streets
Walking at night, looking, searching, finding...it seems like that when you are young. Now it's just streetlights and distorted stars reflected in pools left by the rains. ~~A~~