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I'm Bigger Than Ben Hur! We speak
a different language
you and I
At this moment
frustration wipes away
my affection
As coldly as an icestorm
after a blizzard
Your moronic attacks,
blame games
render you inept
in my eyes
fickle, vicious and vain
I'm sickened
By your volatility
Here I go again
On my own.
You don't know what
you want
moan and groan
But it is I
Who never gets
What I want.
You have a choice here. It
You have a choice here. It can work fine as a stand alone piece, or exceptionally well as is as part of this collection to give it greater context! Either way, you have something special here ;-)
Thanks beaves u think a
Thanks beaves u think a couple more li nes should do it? I will hae to put it on the pile ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Oh no!
I think the poem is excellent! I was referring to it not being in any of your collections. (grrr! Sleep deprivation!) sorry ;-)
Awaiting more
tbc -- this looks like the start of a powerful poetic journey.
kerry
http://kerrybrennan007.blogspot.ca
Thanks Kerry! always a
Thanks Kerry! always a pleasure to hear from you and read your works! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."