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a drop of good shit!
Folder:
I'm Bigger Than Ben Hur! So, it goes again
that little drop of
I just don't fucking care
Powerful stuff.
It bubbles to the surface
And ooozes out the pores
It erases assholes
and the bullshit score.
It levels the playing field my way
It is my best friend of all time
Drags me from hell
and puts me back again
My cherished God given gift
To last for all time.
My beautiful, faithful drop
Of I just don't give a Fuck!
;)
Great write!
While it's fun and playful, it also carries one of the secrets to life - knowing when to not gve a fuck ;-)
do you think i should changew
do you think i should changew it to dont give a shit on that last line? i think it flows better but slightly less impact??? like for instance:
My cherished God given gift
To last for all time.
My beautiful, faithful drop
Of I just don't give a Shit!
then the name fits better
or just call it powerful shit?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Oh no! I like it as written!
Oh no! I like it as written! You nailed the ending!
This is hilariously good
This is hilariously good advice SSmoothie!!! I love it!!! I just love the way you think! "D
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
hear, hear!
I agree with Wane. Great lil' piece, Smoothie. :D
I'm at a point in my life where it really is "eff the b.s. - come correct or move out the way." And when there are people depending on you to make good choices in life (including your own self), that level of detachment works wonders as a form of protection/giving one a sense of freedom.
:D Cheers. :D
thanks Gen ;) the secret to a
thanks Gen ;) the secret to a good life indeed! LOL!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."