if I could walk through your mind...

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If only I could walk through your mind,
what secrets would I see there. The pain
of other loves, the desires and passing passions.
what? what of these distractions I will pull them out of my way
I will tread deeper pushing deeper where I know I will see
My self in your embrace, passionately fucking
and like a voyer watch as you devour me
an push yourself inside me in a rythmic dance
positioning and repositioning. once sated I walk further
and shut the doors that lead to her.
I will deny her existance and push deeper,
deeper into the folds of deep emotion where I know I
am queen of all. her petty existance not even a memory.
I will see written on the walls your undying love and
devotion, I will see all the treasures and sweet nothings
acrued in my name I will see your devotion and
as you kiss and lay my feet in warm water and
rubbed with balm, My heart nursed and held sweetly
adored and one with each other I will hear those desperate words
the ones that I could not claim for the whore who made you
a nothing. let her memory burn away and give that one
sweet kiss that seals our fate and held our love so long
kiss me, kiss me! love, i will give you this one gift so asked of
and more I will declare my love and pledge forever,
kiss me, kiss me here in the halls of your mind
and deny that fucking whore!
You should have been mine.

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WOW! This is something

WOW! This is something else!!!!??? I don't know what to say, but this is really great! It's very raw! Great write!!!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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Yeah its an idea Ive been

Yeah its an idea Ive been toying with for some time I wasnt sure how to write it or if i ever would but here it is in a draft form at least. hopefully I will find time to fix it to the level it deserves :) hugsSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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