dead wrong

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The focus is all wrong! wrong, wrong, wrong!
this is not the fault of grand schemes of love or hate
or any other failed emotional device.
it is the torture you bring with your refusal to accept
the way we are and allow us to be who we are.
what do you expect common curtesy for ill harboured deeds
brought about by ill guided dreams feeding ill fated emotions?
drag us all to hell will you? those who will not leave your side
yet you torture us with your presecnce and throw crumbs
of humanity in our faces and we rejoice? for what? look deep, deep inside
there is so much that you will find to appease in one small
deed. Were you able to see and concentrate hard on those
who are living lest they also become emotionally dead.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

to not see those infront of you who have been there for the greater part of your lives is a horrible state of affairs. some know it as being taken for granted. others know it as self absorbtion. which are you a member of?

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dmjmotivation's picture

The mirror...

This word will force you to define which line of the fence your on. I hope your published. Great word!

SSmoothie's picture

Wow thanks! I am enjoying

Wow thanks! I am enjoying your works very much! I will comment soon too while ive got time on some great ones! Cheers SS :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Solitary_Dreamer's picture

after some thought

the first one... I grew up and outcast and am even now a loner.. a deep piece and I enjoyed reading it

SSmoothie's picture

thanks i was also on the outside much of my life

So I decided to change that and reached out to people. It was hard and risky but admitting you need something from someone is the first step. In still harsh in ny personality traits too honest and upfront for many never having to armor thoughts or spare emotions in lack of company, but my jobs are really all about interfacing and producing outcomes so I will say love company and socializing just really adore my own company more than ever since in only alone in the car driving to work or in the toilet! Lol! Cheers SS thanks for reading!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."