ordinary love

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i have no words for you
no pretty pictures on the page
no deaftly designed soliloquy
No carefully crafted verses
Or fanciful notes of desire
I can't write the lines
that painterly describe
A romantic windy sunset
With all its glorious colours
By the sparkle of the blackened
Dusk ocean oily and limpid
I have not any wonderous
Descriptions but this honest
and plain attempt at saying
in a very real way you are
no ordinary love.

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I'm not feeling it right now!

I'm not feeling it right now! Lol! Grrrrrrrrrr!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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soliloquy ?

soliloquy ?....damn it my Redneck dictionary didn't cover that ! Thank someones god for Google....ROFL
the poem was still good even if I did have to learn a new & different word ..lol. ~ DD ~


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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thank someone's god lol!

DD thank someone's god lol! You're a hilarious red neck gosh darn it ! ;) I just hope I spelt it right? Lol


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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So beautiful. You're an

So beautiful. You're an amazing writer.

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Hey how's my fave

Hey how's my fave poet?
Missed ya! How's it all going Fitzy? Thanks for the complement ;) u always make my day! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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It's going well thanks. I've

It's going well thanks. I've been extremely busy but i'll be back shortly. Talk to you soon