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Unchecked Flitters (BlueJay gets it ~ you decide)
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FUN STUFF! flitter little jay
frollick away
what have you
worry of my worry
the trouble of my days
fillter find a playmate
jump into the fountain
raise your wing
with out a care
and sun bake there
happy and free what
have you little bird
to teach me?
flitter and jitter
as i jeer locked here
flitter and frolic
I am too seriously
happy dear to ever
comprehend the
lightness and joy
of your free little ways
Come sit by my window
flitter and frollic there
and show me how to
kiss away my cares with
such a blue grey breast as yours
how can you play?
hush little blue Jay
I want to tell you this
come closer, a little more
I have a secret to tell of
a happiness I keep
tucked under my wing,
come closer, yet
I want to snap your neck!
okay okay I felt sorry for the bluejay and Im not that mean its a bit of a joke... now you decide should I change the ending and make its neck thought unwrote? lets see what happens shall we? lets go!
ummm , unsure really ..Is the
ummm , unsure really ..Is the bird your friend for the day frolicking along wwith you , or is the birdie a enemy in disguise ? Do you have trust in the bird with your secret or is it "If I tell you i must kill you" ... You enjoy the birds company but deep down you are unsure about the birdie .... I think the ending is up to you ... If the birdie has a good argument on why it should live let it live , if not then snapping its lil neck may be the only way to keep your secret that you told it ......
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
Gee never thought about it
Gee never thought about it that deeply I was just trying to be funny, but well yes I spose they are all very good points! I'm asking if the ending is too cheap but now you got me thinking... ;) love it keep on opening my eyes!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."