My wordSS

One more misread line
One more antic to decline
Open up my poetry
To the masses and this
Is what I find:

 

 

No news is good news
My pain is amusement
I crack myself open
and pour out My truths
My words,
for me.

 

 

Will you turn them from me?
Humanity bares similarity
The themes are all the same
But each has its own Play
written by the same
I will be there in the
End waiting to find out
like the rest of us
When this drama ends.

 

 

Don't read yourself into my lines
Read your pain into my rhymes
These are
my words,
For me.

 

 

I will show you my pain
And hope from it
something you gain
when you see it
As it is
through my window frame.

 

 

Tirelessly I write
to end these
spirited convexations
Whispers of unheard
conversations
The aura around
your presence
May darken my own gold
But what ever I write
I labour alone.

 

 

These are
My Words
For me.

My consolation
For skipping through
the Madness of my
Spiritual frustrations.

 

 

can you see me
The way I need you to see?
The way I really am?

With these, that are
my words.
For me.

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oh the days... the good ones,

oh the days... the good ones, the bad ones the ones in between... they all are the culminating body of my life... my vision for me.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Daniel-59's picture

I never project Myself into

I never project Myself into another person's writing ,
or at least not intentionally'
but then again there are times when you read something,
then go back an read it again .
realizing that the words have projected themselves .
I believe in this case there's no one who cannot relate.
be it the closet poet who writes in secret , then promptly destroy's it
So no one can see their fear's or pain.
Or the accomplished who make a living at the trade
I for one felt every word an wondered .
Did you take these word from my mind as I lay sleeping.
and If they didn't come from Me
I feel strongly that they should have..
I Will Be Watching from the shadows as I dream
just to see if your traipsing around the clutter in my head.....ROFLMAO !

can you see me
The way I need you to see?
The way I really am
With these that are
my words.
For me.

I like it even if I didn't have anything to do with it lol
I have a feeling somewhere down the road I'll be taking This
an running with it in a new direction
It's been echoing in My head to long ,
which usually means there's only one way to make it stop

Thanks For the read
an the problem of waiting till it tell's me ,what it want's to say
Yes I know sounds crazy lol
~ D Donner ~


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Darn I noticed no question mark?

Oh well it's rhetorical anyway... Lol! Use it, abuse it as you wish I can't wait to see what it brings ;) thank you so much I always enjoy reading your prose, and you have a marvelous way with words! Thus I thoroughly enjoyed your musings here in this comentary. I love the way you position yourself defending all sides and impossible to pin on a particular point stunning. I would love to wander through your mind I think I would be lost happily occupied for aeons! Thank you very much! Kindly SS.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Daniel-59's picture

Question Mark ? lol You'll

Question Mark ? lol
You'll have to excuse Me when it comes to putting punctuation where it belongs.
I failed English miserably, Never was convinced you could build a sentence structure with out a skillsaw and a damn big hammer ,and If it wasn't for spell check Kelly would of never got me to put anything up to begin with. I suck at that to ! Imagine having all these words in your head an then can't make people understand it cause you can't spell "If" right ....lol
as far as asking if an when it tell's Me what it wants ...I'll send it on to you first out of respect that I myself would demand

You are like Kelly My best friend in the planetary system .
You think more highly of my scribbling than I ever will
If You two keep this up I'm going to think maybe I do know something after all
wouldn't that be a hoot for the English teacher ROFLMAO !
well back to reading more of your work an see if I can learn from it
what I know about poetry besides feeling the words has been learned from people such as yourself
~ DD ~


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Your humility makes your work

Your humility makes your work all the more prettier, I am not so demanding :) however I am more respectful of wishes once aware though I can't guarantee it would not be forgotten and replaced with an 'I' moment ;) I like Kelly, she has great taste! Read my new poem it seems to fit also read my bio you will see I am so hopeless with spelling and grammar and why ;) cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

poet610's picture

These are My Words

Another great write my friend.
very deep. while reading i'm sure we all were feeling these words of yours, or at less i was.
Keep penning
610

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Thanks 610 :)

Yes there is an intended juxtaposition of they being my words though words are anybody's but also relating to my words with your own. Thank you so much I am glad you liked it my friend :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

I like this one alot. I

I like this one alot. I wouldn't think that anything you write comes from anyone using you. Mostly because I can tell that you're smart enough to know that channeling a spirit is dangerous. Mostly for you, but might also be for the spirit. For all we know, there could be a possibility that it could become stuck.


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Hey missed ya 789!

That's right my wonderful young soul! :) I never ask for anything to come EVER! I never have. I have always prayed through it all, I ask if it is important God then let it be. It's more a curse than a blessing. Each person experiences different things. We all have instinct and a second sight some more developed than others. Dejavu happens to most people. But I dont like to talk much about it because it conflicts a lot of things :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

=) teehee! 789 XP'

If you could see me right now, you'd see that I'm nodding =P lol. Do you think that a soul could get stuck in someone's body?


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SSmoothie's picture

Yeah have you heard the of walk-ins?

It's a pretty scarey concept! :s keep away from it . Just talk that's all and sit and carefully listen :) praying is also very good. :) by the way there's usually a soul that's stuck in your body, happens everyday with YOUR soul :P if you could see me now, you'd see I'm nodding! Lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

lol! Copy cat! XD I promise

lol! Copy cat! XD I promise that I won't invite any spirit to use my body. I know that that is dangerous!


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Thank you my dear 789

HugSS baby doll! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

right back at you hon!

right back at you hon!


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facethetruth2b's picture

Loved it ..I see yu write

Loved it ..I see yu write YOUR words no one elses .It is your life you are trying to dysect , your feelings..Keep it up ,,Great Job loved word for word...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Thanks ;)

Yes that's write! I write for my own experiences and my own thoughts. I have a varied and full life which I need to unpack. ;) you so get me :) HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."