I'm seaching for traces of you in the ether left of your short presence
The warm glow of basking in your thoughts of me
The quiet pleasure of knowing I've affected you in some way
Unruffled you refuse to give anything away
You didn't think it through
My soul has a window on you
The stony looks hide nothing of our irreverent connection
Lost to the world for seconds that fill the void with lifetimes
Scorched by those burning eyes
your glow already envelops me
Don't get too close,
Sparks have a habit of spurring flames
We know better than to mix fire with gasoline
A quick touch
Transfers so much
I am left reeling
I push you away though you still linger in my atmosphere
Standing in your vacated place
Till the last vibration of warmth dissipates
And my soul has the course to move again
searching for another chance to hover near you
In time and spaces undefined by the regular course of love.
Hmmmmmmn.... still
Hmmmmmmn.... still
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
When you feel what you used
When you feel what you used to feel and for some reason it comes as complete shock though it shouldn't... life eh?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Sparks have a habit of spurring flames
A smouldering suppressed emotion can turn into a conflagaration Rightly said
©bishu
Thank you so much bushy! :X
Thank you so much bushy! :X I am touched!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
deep within the soul, hiding
deep within the soul, hiding beneath your eyes
like delicate blooms, gone amist the winter skies
an Earth's precession, marks the depth of time
in those flickering moments, was something divine
like voices made of light, echoing the eternity of your gaze
lusting for what they cannot have, flames of passion ablaze
your words acost me, enrapturing the fabric of my soul
don't let that slip away, that for which we love
Oh wow Bourtie! That is
Oh wow Bourtie! That is magnificent! Bravo! You sure are something in incredible!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
realy that last line is
realy that last line is killer...strong piece, drama in all parts, bravo
Yes the last lines are
Yes the last lines are usually my favourite thank borough :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
feeling it
It has to burn sometime.
KS
Ive had enough cold showers.
Yeah, I know what you mean km
Yeah, I know what you mean km :/
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
intense imagery
such complex emotion, elegantly portrayed. and i LOVEthat last line!!
Awwww thanks you made my
Awwww thanks you made my day!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Rich Imagery
is always a surprise and welcome with newness and originality. Enjoyed particularly "irreverent connection" Nice. - xoxoxo Stella
Thanks Stella always
Thanks Stella always wonderful to hear from you! This write was a seed for a song and dialogue I'm working on for a musical theatre piece. So good when you say you like it it means it's gonna work :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."