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House of Suicide
Hey! Welcome to the house of suicide,
Where lost souls come to die.
Just follow me down this hall...
Your death had made its call.
So Let me show you to your room
Where you can end all your gloom.
This is a place where you end all your pain
This is a place where you have no worries to gain.
Welcome to the house of suicide,
Where lost souls come to die.
Go ahead and dice your arms...
Here, theres no harm.
Hang yourself with that rope...
Anything you do here can help the cope.
Well...heres your room number 247.
Don't worry we promise you will go to heaven.
Oh, yea...don't worry about the blood stain.
We don't care as long as your away from the pain.
By the way...don't mind the blood on your bed...
Earlier some girl shot herself in the head.
This is a place where you end all your pain
This is a place where you have no worries to gain.
Welcome to the house of suicide,
Where lost souls come to die.
"Poe-like piece" displays superb theatrical talent, and excellent imagination. (You did a great job on this one, Kate.) The poem not only moved me but woke me up like a strong cup of coffee on a bitter winter morn. You've got a lot of talent, Kate...just wish you'd post more. A lot of people read your work, and they probably wish for more, as well. "Where lost souls come to die" is a unique line and fits well into the overall hardcore and bleak nature of this one. I collect golden and silver age horror comics so I can really relate to the idea. You are so fine!!
new_wave_franky
August 18, 2009.
very interesting and wonderful piece! i like this poem a lot!
Dr. Zayed Bin Zakir Shawon