teardrops

A teardrop fell from my eye

and rolled down my cheek

on its brief journey,it traveled though the loneliest parts of my mind

crossed a breaking heart

and brought a downpour on to a ravaged soul

who would think a drop of water could travel so far, and touch so much

in a moment of time

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Stardust's picture

this i like very much :)

this i like very much :) amazing indeed, how a short journey of a single teardrop can mean so much to one n not a thing to another

also, i liked ur poem "journey", exceptional views on afterlife :)

keep writin', best wishes :)

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palewingedpoetess's picture

almost as brief as it is lovely...........

excellent use of so few words indeed........... sincerely, Melissa Lundeen

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