A teardrop fell from my eye
and rolled down my cheek
on its brief journey,it traveled though the loneliest parts of my mind
crossed a breaking heart
and brought a downpour on to a ravaged soul
who would think a drop of water could travel so far, and touch so much
in a moment of time
this i like very much :)
this i like very much :) amazing indeed, how a short journey of a single teardrop can mean so much to one n not a thing to another
also, i liked ur poem "journey", exceptional views on afterlife :)
keep writin', best wishes :)
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almost as brief as it is lovely...........
excellent use of so few words indeed........... sincerely, Melissa Lundeen
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