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Another paradise.
The sea roars and crashes into the shore
my body aches, and my legs feel sore.
there are clouds that hover above me
but theres no rain
just a blue mist
that reminds me of the pain
everytime i look by my side
theres no hand to hold on to
the grains of sand in my hand
are slowly blowing away.
i fall, but find no need
to get up and i start to flee
from this stepped on
life of mine
the grassy land in which we reside
a strange and cold paradise.
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I love this poem..