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He thought he was
Doing this world a service
By blocking her light and
Spinning her round and round
He thought not that his real service
Would have been to spin her right
Revealing her light to them all
He thought he was
Doing this world a service
By blocking her light and
Spinning her round and round
He thought not that his real service
Would have been to spin her right
Revealing her light to them all
Very Nice
I like the meter. I like the feeling of movement. The feeling of being spun about and around. I like the repetition and the front rhyming.
Thank you
Thank you, David. I appreciate the read and comment. Hope we can get the rhyme flowing again soon. :)
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