Coyote

Why must you 

Make cruel

Comedy of us?

 

Your slap stick

Kind of has

A stinger

 

You're like a bee

Who's nest

We did not plunder

 

Yet we stood too close

As you smelled

Our hunger

 

 

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Hi. I admire how you say a lot without saying a lot.Not as easy as it looks  I guess less is more more or less 

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That's pretty cool.

Thank you for that compliment.

Confidence successfully boosted!

I am glad to know I am translating. :)


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Question

What is your wacky name about? Just joking. Would like to know anyway 

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Soot & ash

I figure I was burnt down, and am about ready to rise like a Phoenix. 


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Thanks. Don’t be too hard on yourself Sooty. You’re not an ash. Actually, I was in Phoenix once. Didn’t stay, left Tuscun.

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Not ash...

Soon to be a flame rising up with wings. :D

 

Spent time in Tucson. Phoenix was too darn hot. So was Tucson in summer. But monsoon was really cool. 


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Hi sooty hope u r goody. Last year I went on a group bike tour of Jamaica. One day, I wasn't with the group, I cyclelone. I fell off the bike, felt something torn. Aid? Oh. gotta go. Like they say in Kingston see ya mon, soon!

 

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Jamaica

Sounds Rasta maan. 

 

I am goody

And rather sooty

I crushed my bike

But it still is pretty


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Lay off the ganja ok

It's not good for you Your title reminds me of that great Joni Mitchell song. Do you know it?