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Never is a Promise
Promise me,
promise you will stay.
One more moving night,
no more endless fights.
I long for you so,
please, I beg 'do not go!'
Pacing floors to stop this hurt,
I weep alone in your forgotten shirt;
Never is a promise you used to quote.
As the clock moves all tired hours,
dying pedals fall from still flowers.
You did not kiss me strong,
nor did you kiss me long.
Whispers left my scented skin,
should our eyes meet willfully again?
Your leaving was your dire deed,
now left me with my solemn's need.
An angel weeps this tragic night,
for you'll walk blindly from heaven's sight.
Awww this is so sad and
Awww this is so sad and precious simultaneously.... and the rhyming structure managed to give this piece an air of sweetness and innocence despite the disappoint and heartbreak... great job :)... thank you for sharing!
Yes I do agree with you that
Yes I do agree with you that it is sad but having tone and feel brings it all the worthwhile. Thank you for reading!
Sonya