Ashes to snow

Ashes to snow <3

the sun starts to rise the snow starts to melt
to the night will come not soon enough
I will rise again to feast on the ashes
Of the torn and dead
He kneels down to the victims
Just one touch they turn to ashes
Ready sink his long jagged teeth
Into his decaying victim
A voice rang the fiery cave

" Stop! "

He Slowly turned and looked
he laughter
"haha you stupid girl
I don't know how you made it down here
but ! you will not get out "
She stood with a smug look on her face
She said with a soft settle tone voice
" how dare you feast on the fallen souls ?"
he snickered
I'v been locked away
In a cage full of blades
Cut and torn broke beyond repair
A girl long ago stole my heart
Ripped it from my chest and gave me a kiss
Left me on the chilly October night
With My last breathe I sold my soul to the devil
A deal to live forever
to Make the world suffer
One pathetic human at a time
To find her
To kill her ..!!
" I'm feeling generous , You have courage girl
Leave Now And I'll spare you're life "
You'll have to kill me she said
"FARE ENOUGH "
He roared
His dark raspy voice Rattled the cave the jagged rocks falling
He stood on his feet His body badly torn
His eyes black He started running
his feet rumbling and crashing the ground beneath
As he leaped on her and took her to the ground
He looked at her
" you should be turned into ashes .."
Clearing his voice panicking
She whispered into his ear
" You can't kill the dead "
She laughed hysterically
His anger building every second she laughed
He got up in anger walking in distress
“who are you “
He spoke in a firm upset voice
She looked up at him
My name is “ashes” she stood there
As he looked up at her
“no .. no it can’t be “
Moving her red and black hair off her soft face
“yes .. snow Its me “
You left me to die ..
Stole my heart
“ I know “
She almost in tears .
“you have been on my mind
For years Every day I regretted
Stealing you’re heart
You were just a boy
Barely , 17 Falling for me
But that night ..
She whispered
You stole mine .. I have died
To be with you can’t stand another day being alone”
Ashes voice turning raspy a tear started falling
Snow fell to his torn knees Said three words
She’ll never forget
I love you ..
Ashes Gasped
Snow said
“come here ashes let me give you one more kiss”
Walking to him in tears whimpering “I love y….”
As she spoke he roared and lunged his Long carotid nails
Into her flesh and into her heart
She fell lifeless into his arms
He whispered into her ear with her last breath
“I’m not sorry”
And dropped her lifeless body to the cave floor
Ashes turned to ashes
The sun started to sire
Snow started to melt
And said with his last breath smiling
“good guys finish last”

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ashes <3 hope you like it ! Has alot to do with my other poem "love to kill"

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tabitha's picture

very good writing

very good writing

SpecialSense's picture

God, I love this! Such an

God, I love this! Such an amazing story, and gorgeously written.

Snow's picture

Thank you ! =]

Thank you ! =]


“Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”

Snow's picture

Thank you ^_^

Thank you ^_^


“Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Gah!!

You killed me!!

What a heartwrenching (literally speaking) read.

I do like it ^_^
I like how you added two poems together with a title of a third.
I do that sometimes as well.
Sometimes I leave people comments and like it so much I'll incorporate it in another work of mine.
Keep working on your stories and you will get better and better at it.
You have a great imagination.
For a first this was special.
Thank you for sharing.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Snow's picture

Thank you ashes =3

Thank you ashes =3


“Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”