I Can't Feel Anymore

it all starts when someone I love or trust-in hurts me over and over again
I stop feeling; no emotions left for any tears,
no emotions left for someone who gives me the right kind of love to feel loved back
and even tho I want to feel for that person and show how much I do care,
nothing, nothing shows
no tears to even force down my cheeks
emotionless I stand there
like I'm made of stone.
the only thing that hurts is not caring.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this was my first poem that i wrote when i was 12 years old.

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CaptainShambles's picture

not too bad there kiddo, your

not too bad there kiddo, your doin well if your writing this well already, at 12 thats pretty incredible. Keep it going, i look forward to your progress.


I'm sorry i wasn't who you thought i was. F**k it, i'm sorry i wasn't who i thought i was.
...I bought the heartbreak hotel on my own with no investors, closed it down and opened the F**k you, get over it bed and breakfast

twisted_soul's picture

one its so beautiful two you

one its so beautiful two you were 12 when you wrote this?! lol jk its just i was so imature when i was 12, what im saying if you were 12 when you wrote this it shows you have so much talent. keep it up :)

jilldead's picture

its beautiful

its beautiful


omn nomnom nomnom ;D

JAP's picture

I really like this poem verry

I really like this poem verry good job :)


Jessica