Shifting his steps slowly
Thinks of how he somehow hasn't died
A weapon of some type rests on his back
Linked by chain to his side
His lightly rusted armor
Eyes fixed upon the sky
Letting his thoughts drifty freely
He commands himself not to cry
He grasps the handle
Of this object he carries
This impliment of punishment
Was the very tool of his brothers defeat
And now as he stares into the blade
Cold, stained with blood and earth
Disregarding the weight of the taken lives
and ignoring this despair to which he has given birth
For his search shall continue
Until he finds the soul
Who ruined his childhood
Journeying through every condition
Having no care for what is evil
and for what is good
Whoever tries to halt his quest
For whatever reason they hold, valid or not
He shall not hesitate
To take their lives, without a second thought
And for if the situation
Gets the best of his body and mind
He shall be instilled with the furious spirit
of his mighty brother, and his rage shall travel blind
Along this way, through the intricacies of time
Many lives will be taken
Much blood shall be spilled
But again, many different evils
shall be slain
but hand in hand with that
many innocents, will also fall prey
For he has but one goal
As he travels down this abandoned path
To execute the ones who deserve
and show his enemies the meaning of wrath
You should never wish
To cross paths with this man
"Iron Thorn" is his traveling name
His name truly is Amadeus
And he is simply a wanderer with a reason..
You say,
"God damn this poem is hilariously cheesey."
I think you have the base for something nifty here, the mindset and the theme are appealing. Try reworking it, hope your muse aids you.
Ken
My Secret River