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Ohhh daddy my body and mind are craving your touch, your energy so badly it's driving me insane how much I want you to do to me what only you can do to me and make me feel....oh daddy I know your hurting and tired but pretty please daddy will you come lov
Ohhh daddy my body and mind are craving your touch, your energy so badly it's driving me insane how much I want you to do to me what only you can do to me and make me feel....oh daddy I know your hurting and tired but pretty please daddy will you come love on your babygirl the way only my bestest in the world daddy can do
I strongly disagree.
Writing is controversial. If you feel uncomfortable reading this, than don't read it, but never tell someone to keep their mind closed off, or privately kept upon a shelf. I've read far worse than this on here, and I think any social gathering people join on the internet should be well aware of the things that they might come across as raw or uncomfortable, but this is what it is about. Someone writing, reaching out in the only form that they know possible, for words to be read...you don't have the right to take that from someone. This is their voice.
This poem can be taken many ways.
And aren't all writings suppose to be dark, weird, and mostly crap?
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
You have
Your opinion. I read it before I realized its intent. Highly offensive. Let the admin decide.
And that's two opinions to yours. Go write dark crap.
now I'd know to avoid your writes too.
I 'll not hassle you or your new bud here.
walking away...
footsteps retreating back outta shadows of this alleyway.
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
You're missing what I was trying to point out.
Writing is suppose to be offensive, dark, happy, beautiful, est...
To be a writer you have to conjure feelings within people.
In this case anger, awkwardness, discomfort, est...
I think the author did a great job with that in this write,
but you guys aren't thinking outside of the box,
but more on a personal level.
& I get it.
Just my opinion though.
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"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Oh
Crap
edited from my former word.
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words