I'll paint you a world
That only dreamers see
A world far to revealing
Or magical to me
But this world is different
And can never be misused
Bring nothing that is valuable
Or something you fear to loose
Walk with me down the path
Onto this canvas I have set
Do nothing you wish not to do
And let go of all regrets
Once you step inside
I promise you you'll never turn around
By little gypsies and faries
You'll be forever bound
"Ok I'm ready for whatever comes
And I will journey into new
Whatever that lies ahead
I am ready to go through"
After I stepped inside
It was nothing like it was painted
No rainbows, no sun, no life
Everything dead and fainted
Everything was wilted away
And nothing alive was here
Only darkness and some stars above
And only silence was pierced
I cried "let me out of here"
But no answer replied
So the only thing I could do
Was sit alone and cry
A voice cracked above
And I heard the echo below
The voice was so familiar
But the face I didn't know
"See how you were decieved
By a few simple lines
Painted on a canvas
Looking marveously divine
Tricked in here you were
And shall never be set free
But you broke the first rule
You brought and lost something valuable;and thats your dignity
I really admire the way you place such heart-felt emotions within your work. This particular piece came across as very well thought out, highly visual, and, (most of all), "extremely profound." It delivered a truly meaningful message throughout its overall content, flowed wonderfully, and left me even more appreciative of your poetic talents.
new_wave_franky
December 29, 2009.