I'll Paint You A World

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More Than A Memory

I'll paint you a world

That only dreamers see

A world far to revealing

Or magical to me

But this world is different

And can never be misused

Bring nothing that is valuable

Or something you fear to loose

Walk with me down the path

Onto this canvas I have set

Do nothing you wish not to do

And let go of all regrets

Once you step inside

I promise you you'll never turn around

By little gypsies and faries

You'll be forever bound

"Ok I'm ready for whatever comes

And I will journey into new

Whatever that lies ahead

I am ready to go through"

After I stepped inside

It was nothing like it was painted

No rainbows, no sun, no life

Everything dead and fainted

Everything was wilted away

And nothing alive was here

Only darkness and some stars above

And only silence was pierced

I cried "let me out of here"

But no answer replied

So the only thing I could do

Was sit alone and cry

A voice cracked above

And I heard the echo below

The voice was so familiar

But the face I didn't know

"See how you were decieved

By a few simple lines

Painted on a canvas

Looking marveously divine

Tricked in here you were

And shall never be set free

But you broke the first rule

You brought and lost something valuable;and thats your dignity

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new_wave_franky's picture

I really admire the way you place such heart-felt emotions within your work. This particular piece came across as very well thought out, highly visual, and, (most of all), "extremely profound." It delivered a truly meaningful message throughout its overall content, flowed wonderfully, and left me even more appreciative of your poetic talents.

new_wave_franky
December 29, 2009.