Will You Be Mine?

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Part II: DARKNESS

Will you be mine?
I long for you to reply.
Life is so alone without you.
Love is so alone without you.

Yesterday, I cried.
Only for a moment,
Until the love inside me died.

Burning hate rose to the surface.
Engulfing me without a purpose.

My eyes shut tight until they bleed.
Inside my chest, a cavity.
Never will I long to love,
Ever. Love drove me to insanity.
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Only in my dreams, do you;
Reply. Why? Why must I hurt to have you?

Sinking further into your eyes, I shrivel like a dying flower.
Hopeless, left alone. My darkest hour;
Approaches me with a smile.
Locked beneath the surface of this cold and gloomy dream;
Lost. Lost beneath you for a while. Only for a while.

Im a fool.

Rest comes easy.
Evading the deception, only for a moment.
My eyes open.
And diamond tears melt away with you.
I cried today, only for a moment until the love inside me died.
Never will I want to love you, ever.

A day has slowly passed away.
Love lingers like Death.
Oh, how I want to hate you, I want to hold you. I want to feel your breath.
Never will you love me, like I love you;
Ever. Forever will I ask if you'll one day be mine.

Forever will I ask you to join me in death.
Only then can I give my remaining breath to you.
Reach out for my hand, and hold it tight against your chest.
Everything I feel goes away again.
Violent love, so softly pulls me in, engulfing me without a purpose.
Everything means nothing unless you're mine!
Red in my eyes, I search but never find. I search but never find.
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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Deranged love.

I think you have something great going here.
You should continue it.
Awesome write so far.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

TheKrook's picture

out of words.

I would, but I ran out of words. If you look at the first letter of every sentence...youll see.


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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Complex.

Or if you want to get creative or complicated you could always switch up the words too
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All in all it is still an excellent write.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Truly insane.

If love drove you truly you should keep continuing like that.
W
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Keep going.
I know there must be more you want to say.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

TheKrook's picture

continue?

Hmmm. I'm sure I can think up something. I'm sure once I get on it.... the words will be there. :)


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