how i tricked the devil

i got 24 hours to live

everything i've done is wrong

i had a talk with jesus

told me why he can't let me in heaven

i had a talk with the devil

and asked if we can make a deal

he accepted my offer

now i got two more years to live

in exchange for my soul

i wanted to make everything right

so i apologized to every one

i gave back to every one

just like that two yrs were almost up

i was hit by a car

so once again i had that talk with jesus

i said "i made everything right,

so can i come home now."

he said "walk through the gates."

i said "i got one more person to see,"

i spoke to the devil and told him

"tear up the contact i don't need it

anymore i just needed your help

to find me a place in heaven,

i can keep my soul, it ain't been two yrs."

now i can walk through the gates

its time for me to go home

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is to show that even the wisest people can be tricked and not no

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poetrylover's picture

i LOVE this poem. it was so

i LOVE this poem. it was so good i wish i had thought of it. good job keep it up.


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SSmoothie's picture

Wise. I like the way your

Wise. I like the way your mind works. 'Bill and teds excellent adventure' is a toungue in cheek view of this idea. Thanks it was lovely!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

msjwh's picture

That was touching!

My soul is crying after reading this poem.