i got 24 hours to live
everything i've done is wrong
i had a talk with jesus
told me why he can't let me in heaven
i had a talk with the devil
and asked if we can make a deal
he accepted my offer
now i got two more years to live
in exchange for my soul
i wanted to make everything right
so i apologized to every one
i gave back to every one
just like that two yrs were almost up
i was hit by a car
so once again i had that talk with jesus
i said "i made everything right,
so can i come home now."
he said "walk through the gates."
i said "i got one more person to see,"
i spoke to the devil and told him
"tear up the contact i don't need it
anymore i just needed your help
to find me a place in heaven,
i can keep my soul, it ain't been two yrs."
now i can walk through the gates
its time for me to go home
i LOVE this poem. it was so
i LOVE this poem. it was so good i wish i had thought of it. good job keep it up.
Robyn Deters
Wise. I like the way your
Wise. I like the way your mind works. 'Bill and teds excellent adventure' is a toungue in cheek view of this idea. Thanks it was lovely!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
That was touching!
My soul is crying after reading this poem.