Author Information
NO FAREWELL
ITS HARD TO SAY GOODBYE
SO I WILL SEE YOU IN THE FUTURE
YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRY
BEFORE I GO TAKE A PICTURE
I'M STILL IN YOUR HEART
EVEN THOUGH ITS HARD TO BE APART
IT WOULDN'T BE RIGHT IF I SAID FAREWELL
WITH MUCH ON MY MIND
ONE DAY I SHALL PREVAIL
THEN I SHALL I SEE AND NOT BE BLIND
I SHALL NOT SAY FAREWELL FOR IF I RETURN
KEEP FAITH AND BELIEVE IN ME
FOR I WONT BE GONE LONG
JUST THINK OF BIRDS FLYING ACROSS THE SEA
TRYING TO MAKE THEIR WAY HOME
JUST LIKE TREES LOSE THEY LEAVES
ITS TEMPORARY I WILL BE BACK
I'M TRYING TO SAY ALTHOUGH I'M GONE
IN YOUR MEMORIES I NEVER LEFT
SO I CAN'T SAY FAREWELL BECAUSE I WOULD BE LYING
It's a typical poem on an un
It's a typical poem on an un original theme but I loved the 'you' in this. Your personal voice is quite charming. You have a nice way with words although quite safe iMagine how awsome you will be when you start to take risks, thinking of unusual metaphors to explain the likeness of what you feel, I have read your other poems and haven't been disappointed yet, although somewhat a little unsatisfied, can't wait to see what you do next keep writing your journey is beautiful.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
YOU are good!
Don't listen to Sanctus!
You are a poetic genius!
Please continue to write.
This is awful. Not at all
This is awful. Not at all trying to be rude, but I'd find a new hobby if I were you. Writing poetry is clearly not "your thing".
IS WRITING YOUR THING? IF YOU
IS WRITING YOUR THING? IF YOU THINK IT IS STOP BEING SO MEAN TO OTHER PEOPLE.
Robyn Deters