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CINQUAIN-One Carefree Day
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walking,
the sky opened
we ran to seek shelter
from the brewing storm. Drenched, we were
laughing.
walking,
the sky opened
we ran to seek shelter
from the brewing storm. Drenched, we were
laughing.
I see you are a master of cinquain. I have been reading several of your pieces. You have your own style and it shines through perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, V! I changed it already. :)
Belle
not really a critique, but question...should the open be opened since the rest is past tense? had an experience like this one, only not much laughing. it took a bit to realize we weren't in a real "twister" scene. : )