Come to me, watch my eyes
Come catch a glimpse of paradise
Watch my smile while I cry
Show my life as I die
See my light! Is truly dark
See my magic, only farce
The door which leads you to my heart
Is really a wall, protect my heart
Yes I smile, but you can't see
The pain and tears inside of me
The magic I show you to make you smile
With a broken heart all the while
I live and love to make you glad
All the while to miss what I had
This my job, I won't let you see
So that you won't cry for me
Magic I claim, magic I know
All an illusion, only a show
But soon you will leave, a smile on your face
And that smile will be my redeeming grace.
I happen to stumble upon this
I happen to stumble upon this while browsing and I'm so glad I did. The theme here is something I can truly relate to. Especially these lines "The magic I show you to make you smile With a broken heart all the while"
Well done and thank you for sharing :)
Im sorry but this is freekin
Im sorry but this is freekin amazing especially the first two lines ”come to me, watch my eyes come catch a glimpse of paradise” the rest of it is really good to.
-Miss. Miller
Thanks so much, I really
Thanks so much, I really wasn't sure about this poem..... it didn't flow how I wanted it to. But thank you for the comment!
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
It flows fine to me. I like
It flows fine to me. I like your writing so far. I think I've browsed before but can't remember when.