Across the deep blue oceans
I wonder at its timely motions
Rippling waters drifting wide
In its depth how I long to hide
Seas of green and skies of grey
Tides with never ending sway
Waves come rolling in and out
No one hears my lonely shout
Horizons span the oceans wide
Meeting up with blazing skies
Sun and moon they rise and fall
Taking with them again my all
Drifting on in its undulations
Causing magnificent creations
Sands of silver reaching high
As my dreams goes racing by
this poem
is my favorite
Dear Susie
What a lovely poem – in the ink I see brilliance – a genius at work on a level that inspires!
Regards
Donkerman
This poem was so beautifully written, and was so vividly portrayed. I could imagine the oceans and sky in my head, and I fully understand it. I can relate to what you have said. Great job.
many times we can see our own reflections in the depth of ocean. very good expressed! Charisma
This is a wonderfully beautiful poem but expresses great pain too. I enjoyed the analogy to the ocean of the waves of depression being alone can bring, seemingly without end. I hope this is not a reality based poem, for a woman with this much depth and feeling that can express it in a beautiful and tender way is a treasure for any man. Thank you for sharing these touching words.