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Upon An Ending
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Teardrop of Coloured Soul
Life has nothing to show more fair;
Than soul who creates fantasy inside.
Oh tortured heart how it does cringe
At words flung easily at mind so bare.
This mouth now will say nothing more,
Of rumpled sheets left soiled and torn.
Of slipping hope so quickly dashed;
Gripping pain left tossed upon a floor.
Glitter diamonds are the lights seen,
The hopeless path of worshipped sun.
Oh merciful knife come slice the heart,
Let blood flow where love has been.
Dear Lord, do you know this pain?
Have you seen black as I have seen?
Wasted words upon an uncaring eye,
Who only wishes the end to remain.
The river of life ebbs slowly past;
The ever dropping sound of pain.
Oh sweet glistening ending thoughts,
That open avenues that never last.
I cry out in frustrated angered words,
But little sense is made of dusted heart,
Whose images cascade into despair.
Oh silent cries that are never heard.
Release me from the vibrant rolling hills,
Let nothing steep stop us from falling.
Sleeping passion that has gone unknown,
In hearts defeated, yet hurting still.
insightful
insightful
Vive le Quebec libre!
like you've got room to talk
like you've got room to talk about top 10 worst o wait you do your number 1 on the list this sounds like some trash torn out of a book and meshed together true poetry comes from feeling so before you write more please learn the meaning of feeling.
"Dude", you wouldn't know
"Dude", you wouldn't know what a real poem was if it bit you on your illiterate ass. Be a good boy and go play so we adults can talk.
illiterate ass is you my friend
i know more real poems then you will ever know to sit and critique something that is not your style is idiocy but ill let you be as i seem to be the only adult here
You'd be more convincing if
You'd be more convincing if you learned correct English grammar, punctuation and spelling. Frankly, Chris is right.
Vive le Quebec libre!
i dont use punctuation by
i dont use punctuation by choice i am entitled to write without it as i see fit as it is my poems im not using it on and i spell fine i use chat lingo so it may seem incorrect to you but to me its normal
You forgot to add that you
You forgot to add that you seem to be illiterate:-)