Author Information
Promise
paying no attention, paying no heed
waiting for the day to be let free
no more chains to tie me down
a promise broken, love lost but not found
childhood is no longer here
no innocence left in the tears
no one but myself to comfort fears
promise made to love and protect
good qualities and guidance left to inflict
how long has life been fazed
living this life's everyday haze
how you broke your promise is still a sting
holding me down, these useless wings
how can i spread them if you wont let me?
why don't you open your eyes, so my pain you can finally see?
a promise broken, love lost but not found
childhood is no longer here
no innocence left in the tears
no one but myself to comfort fears
i like this poem but i really love these lines. ugh, there's so much i want to say about them but i can't find the wrods to say it. it's just beautiful. keep writing, amanda
This poems is good. I rate this one 10 out of 10. Cool poem. I love it. I love the tittle too.
Have a nice and beautiful life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~My Best Wishes~
:)