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Drink Deeply
Oh my special one
Come drink deeply of love...
There are no encumbrances.
Silk, strewn with petals and cinnamon, beckons.
Let us seek each other with abandon
Desiring to please,
To sweeten the soul,
To gladden the heart.
And to dwell with each other forever.
Wow,Beauty.Excellent work.Just a few lines, And you sketched the Whole Thing,What we call LOVE!
What is this life,its aim...Other than,Just to be in love.And in the warm embrace of a beloved,
A deep rest in her bosom.It's all we crave.It's all we need.
Couldn't have said in a better way.U had just written it brilliantly.
I simply enjoyed your imageries.I loved The FOURTH line.Its like a silent invitation;
which actually connects the two parts of your poem or divides it as two segments,
like two lovers in love.In the beginning When you speak of daring any impediments.
And then after concluding; on the sweetness of sharing.and the ardor of love.
Much more to this work.I can view it different ways for days.
Enjoyed it.
Thanx for sharing.
bye.
your comment on Drink Deeply
Thank you for your wonderful and thoughtful, insightful comment. One of the best I have ever read about my poetry.
Many thanks, and good luck to you.