@ 27.225 MHz: An Old Former Settler's Words (Chopin's Nocturnes Playing) Autumn, 1929

At the leading edge of that vast frontier, he

and I explored adolescence's leading

edge:  the settler's pale son with blonde hair, and the

native boy with deliciously brown skin and

waist-length, sable hair.


No European prejudice intruded

upon us---shirtless and barefoot in the sun's

light and on soft prairie grass until, naked,

we satisfied our Love's fierce urges in the

most intimate way.


That summer did not seem to last very long.

His people called him to become a warrior

during the uneasy, sometimes unsettled,

Peace; while mine tore apart the fragile Union

their Fathers gave them.


On November twenty-sixth, Sixty-Eight, he

was slain in the horse soldiers' swift charge---Custer's

quite eager and bloodthirsty Seventh---as they

razed the reservation village, his home, near

to the Washita.


Since then, I despise the sound of flutes and high

pitches, playing any music at all, most 

notably "Garryowen," that lighthearted

accompaniment to the brutal murder

of my Beloved.



Starward-Led

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This series is about words spoken and heard, mostly on c.b. channel 22.


This account was repeated to us on Saturday night, August 7th, 1976 by WoodPulper, who was reading from a transcript made by SilverTongue of an entry in his late great-grandmother's "daybook":  she had worked as a nurse in the facility where the narrator lived out his senior years and ultimately died.

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This is so much more than a

This is so much more than a tragic story of star crossed lovers. It has layers of rapture, agony, rage and a human face put on a shameful moment in history. 

 

Written in the margins is a powerful commentary on injustice. And what is more unjust than the joys of love pulverized, annihilated, by senseless, demonic hate? Bringing the real tragedy to life against a backdrop of sweeping, historical disaster was expertly accomplished in the narration. 

 

Without any unnecessary description, no burdensome explanation, we hear the story through the weary, pain-scarred voice of the old settler, shrewdly juxtaposed with angelic classical music in the background. When his lasting trauma (his aversion to music) is revealed, this detail becomes grimly poignant. 

 

The story itself is a masterclass in vibrant, impactful compression. I felt the full spectrum of emotions like a storm that begins with soft, intoxicating winds and ends with utter destruction. So much lived. So much lost. 

 

Congratulations on another milestone! 

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I cannot find sufficient

I cannot find sufficient words for an adequate thank you.  As always, you have validated the poem.  I know you are very busy, so I really appreciate your time.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]